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You are bidding on a brand *NIP* Ralph Lauren King Size "Gingham" sheet set, blue. Retail for theis set is $129. Buy it here on eBay for less. This Set fits a King Size mattress (78 X 80) and includes: -One King Size FLAT Sheet, finished size 112 X 102 inches -One King Size DEEP FITTED Sheet, fits mattresses up to 14'" DEEP -ONE Set of King Size Pillowcases, finished size 20 X 40 Manufactured with easy care in mind, 100% SOOO SOFT Cotton, Machine wash and tumble dry Made in the *USA*
Here's what I think:-
1. You didn't use HTML so it all comes out in a sprawl. Use, at the very least:-
new paragraph
new line
Ebay's Sell now pages lets you try things out so give it a go!
2. Sort out typos - Retail for theis set
3. Mix of CAPITALS and lowercase - looks untidy. Use ,, around words for emphasis. eg. flat gives flat, flat gives flat and flat will underline it.
4. Starting price could have been lower, use a reserve price to ensure you receive at least your minimum.
5. You ship worldwide and accept PayPal - that's good. You have only put measurements in inches - what about those of us in Europe and Australasia who work in millimetres?
6. Photograph is essential - excellent.
There you go - hope that helps.